Loren

Loren

Topic/Thesis: Deviations in the novel represent our eagerness to judge those who defy the "norm"

Essay Outline:

First Draft of your Essay:

paragraph 1: explain deviations and what defies them, what happens to them?

paragraph 2: explain the fringes, introduce sophie, (dont judge a book by its cover)

paragraph 3: talk abot how the judger is the one that looses out ( for every action there is an equal and opposite reatction)

Group Members: Tom Yun Nikie Martin Josh Chu

Good Copy:

Peer Comments: **Introductory Paragraph Questions:** 1.Does the introduction paragraph grab your attention? Does it anticipates an insightful thesis? 2.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?

**Body Paragraphs Questions:** 1.How well are the quotations integrated and analysed? Have they been chosen with care and taken from a variety of chapters? 2.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?

**Concluding Paragraph Questions:** 1.Does the conclusion include a reworded thesis, summary. 2. Does the conclusion have a memorable ending? 3.How strong is the development of the argument for the whole essay?

Good Copy in MLA forma